Hello, how do you like my poem? - soul silver walk through walls
I was there!
I know that I have created obstacles
natural walls of the false reality
supported by the accompaniment Mans "
finely cut into the corners
I was there!
I see the birds
I hear the call of freedom
Open wings
I can only imagine where we live the world
I was there!
my boots are frozen fingers are cold
sitting on a tree trunk on a frozen river
I believe nothing, and I was shaking more
Wind plays with the leaves, the hum of water
Things I heard in the revolutionary sense
my way through the law
I was there!
Our hand-made, souls connected
Spiral of energy around each fingertip
reflESSONS our shining through the creation of
Silver Sky Blue Brown Green
and I will never forget the love that mourn
I was there!
I know they are no longer
however, that our lives parallel
and when his fingers slowly release
Never forget that your love always be here
I was there!
I know that more and shorter includes
Sand between your toes is more light
clarity caressed my toes
Drops down gently
and I smile
I will be here a while
Friday, February 19, 2010
Soul Silver Walk Through Walls Hello, How Do You Like My Poem?
2 comments:
well,
Infact really good.
Sure there are poets as well stay there, but I'm sure they have more experience than you.
I like ITT, as you are associated with light.
I also begin, as each verse, so I was one my eleven poems, I think there is a good effect
well done, and keep writing pressure ulcers, more, it's really nice (:
x
Do not listen to William. Hes an idiot.
I think the general concept of the poem is good, but the poem might help a little, options with the text. But there are good and have what it takes to be an artist.
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